okay here is my amazing i will tell u about i want to get it out to people some but i will just tell it here for no i may not remember a lot but i will try to remember w/e my mom told me. it won't be in a actual sentence b/c i stink at writing stories. maybe kinda of long also ignore my grammar.
also excuse my spelling.
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when i was about 5 or 6 my doctor discovered a whole in my heart and a this big read ball on it i forgot what its called. I was born with no pulmonary attires, the big red ball was a size of an orange, i was on the news for that one b/c they did an experimental thing in miami if anyone remembers that it was never done on a kid b4 i forgot what it is called. I was in the hospital for a whole summer. I had 5 or 6 surgery's. The doctors said i would never live pass 17 or 15 but i did b/c now i am 16 almost 17. I also have a leaky vale. My attires burn out some how i really don't know how they do that i only have 6 arrtires left i think not really sure.
this is all i can remember.
So how do u like it and how can i get it out to people to inspire them to don't stop believing? or to keep having hope.My amazing life story. a.s.a.p tell me wheat u think and how i can get it out to people?
Tell it the best you can with a beginning, middle and end. Maybe find someone who is a gifted writer to rewrite some of it and word it if you are not comfortable with that.
I think your main point is how you got through all of your own emotions and set backs, tell us how it has effected your life, school, family and friends too over the years. Give us some specific examples, is what my writing teacher always told me.My amazing life story. a.s.a.p tell me wheat u think and how i can get it out to people?
Aneurysm? Clown nose?
It sounds like you owe your life to medical science, not god. If you have six arteries left leading to your heart, that's normal. You still haven't lived past 17, but I wish you well.
That is an amazing story Kimberly. Glad you're still with us. I would first find a copy of the article to add credibility to your story and then go on to give the details.....but use spell check.My amazing life story. a.s.a.p tell me wheat u think and how i can get it out to people?
If you can't write it or even tell it, then you can't get it out.
I don't believe in the Christian deity. This story has not shown AT ALL that God exists. It shows that the doctors were wrong and gave a misdiagnosis. Hardly miraculous, hardly worth talking about.
Praise the Lord! That sounds like something you would read in 'Guideposts'. Check out their website.My amazing life story. a.s.a.p tell me wheat u think and how i can get it out to people?
If you want to inspire people you have to tell a believable story. Lots of people make up things to get attention. Do you have anything at all to back up your claim of a miracle cure? If you do, put it online and make a link. That would help get out your story.
this doesnt prove anything supernatural im sorry but it doesnt. it does show that medical science is coming along nicely.
congratulations on getting through it but it doesnt prove divine intervention.
Hey watev, this my friend is the religious section. Why are you here? You haven麓t shown evidence against a God.
I麓m sorry, but you fail.
Wow...sounds lyke ewe shud contact a netwoik , mebbe ewe kin have a movie of the weak maid of yer "mirackuless" story.
That is a very nice thing you want to do.
Why not create your own blog about it?
Tell your story, and then update every week or so with other great stories or messages of hope.
With all the bad news that people focus on, I'm sure a well-written blog that focuses on stories with happy endings will be refreshing.
Do work on your grammar and spelling... make it the best you can do or have a friend proofread for you-- it will make it easier to read, however some errors will be forgivable if the content is good.
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